Some of the abstracts where amazing. fell in love with the grungy ones, those werent stencil pieces were they?
the second waterfall/stream and room @ 0: 34 were top notch.

some of your concepts were pretty cool, but felt your technique/implimentation could still be improved and needs to grow, especially in that subcutan prelud series, which i enjoyed the most.
really like how it was presented. Start reading drama comic stuff to improve on it
I feel like you could do more within your style, making it technically better without losing what makes it your own style.

The first hair/face drawing @ 1:17 was pretty great