well i find this tut pretty good for your first one u made some good points but idn my opinion getting to close to your opponent isnt really a good idea in all situations



also dont forget to mention that heads dont dq the neck does

also to be exact i would mention that boxshu at times can not be fair (hand cannon-ers ect) so be sure to inform them on the "disrespecful" moves a.k.a cheesy aka annoying af

but thats just a idea a toribash tut idea