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Yeah, I'm going to offer some advice to improve it.

1. Improve your goddamn spelling. Anyone who can speak English properly should be able to write it as well. Using cuz, and "Using ur leg to create extra momentum for ur twist". At least spell the most basic words correctly. If you make an honest mistake I get it, but this English is like a 2nd grade level.

2. Go into a little bit more detail. If you look at some other tutorials they go into detail about every single little thing, I feel as though you barely scraped the surface of this topic...

Other then that good job.
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