i thought it would be bothersome to be constantly clicking the Show button to show and hide the pictures, since it is really picture heavy. i added a link on the beggining of the post though, it links to a version where the pictures are all in a spoiler. here it is: http://forum.toribash.com/showpost.p...&postcount=323

additionally, i've just fixed a few mistakes and formatting fallacies in the op

thanks for feedback