i think your main problem is not delaying stuff enough. you spend very little time in your setups and it cucks your momentum big time
https://i.imgur.com/b8YKyyW.png
in the pic u cant really see but im over 45 degrees more rotated than you are, and doing the same launch off the foot. i delay it like that cause it gives me more momentum and also makes the movement look less jerky. hard to compare through images but if u look at someone elses replay youll see how much delay there is between movement compared to yours. i cane xplain better in discord if u want. also post in my thread