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Originally Posted by D4yr View Post
Hi

Alright for starters, i think that first back kick was a bit awkward placement, maybe couldve been placed a bit higher or used as a push back to get a better dm. Going from there tho the actual replay flows well with a bit off odd moments here and there but overall a decent replay. The skeet at the end was a nice touch aswell

Originally Posted by D4yr View Post
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This one i thought you were going for a bit of a manip at first, but same thing you transitioned into a awkward back kick for my likings. Those back kicks just look a bit stiff. Going from there, dms were impeccable, good placements and flow throughout the replay. Keep up the good work fam <3


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