Nice tutorial, could use a little more, but what you have is good.
Just remember,
Originally Posted by ronalds
I do not expect to see tutorials showing how to do a move on toribash. The only exception to this is if you are creating an indepth tutorial on techniques and/or advice in toribash.
I'd say this is pretty in depth, and you're not showing anyone how to do moves, but just remember that.
Also, I like how you told people to sprint a bit and see how they're moving. I do this occasionally, and some people also need the exercise.