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Originally Posted by Lucci View Post
In the mean time here is a ukebash I did. My first one really

yo this was nice for a first timer.
opener was pretty straight forward, nothing special, gets the job done right, and you continued it pretty well, you could've cleaned up the launch at 397 i suppose, you went airbourne for a single frame and it looked like you hesitated to fully extend the knee the first time, made it look twitchy, the kicks was well executed, can't really say much about them, what i will point out is your the state of your lumbar at some points, makes your tori look iffy when you bend the lumbar the opposite way of where you were spinning to and when you bend it a little too early when you were going for the first kick, the skeet was cute, doesn't really add much to the replay, if you were to extend your glutes at 290 ish, you could've gotten the decap.

pretty well made replay i would say, you just need to fix your form and you're good to go, hold your neck a little more often i would say, but i think thats just me.

keep going my guy you're quickly improving in every replay genre.