Opener was controlled with the manipulation, pretty nice.
As said before: "Grab Kills The Manipulation". But anyhow, in another way, the decap was powerful and aimed pretty good and the Tori was fast so that made a pretty clean and nice decap.
Pose could be done better. Ajkasfjaljfalskjfaklsjfas. What would I say? Pretty nice and controlled replay ;P

Bump :c

The manip was pretty simple, and I would disagree on grab ruining manipulations, but in this case it does.
Well aimed kick though.

Replay.

I had a better version of that replay but it wasn't finish yet.

Eh, it's just two boomhits. The first one is better because it's clean, but the rest is just standart.

The opener looked pretty common, other than that it was a nice replay.

Maybe edit a punch in there somehow?

Looked forward that it's just a 2 booms replay.
Stills nice. But a punch for dismembering the chest from the hand would be cooler.

Make the transition to the second boom better and then finish it.

You destroyer O.o

Really nice end, and pose balance.
That's the best pose you do, I'd say.

Wow.
First boom was great. I can never do a boom at Uke's crotch from the front. Tap on the shoulder looked a little wierd, would be nicer if you pulled it back or something instead of raising your arm again.
Next two hits flowed perfectly and were really good. I don't like how the kick after those hits the entire leg, though. Next DM was okay, was cool how the wrist area flew off and hit his arm after it bounced.
Nice pose, but I think the way you got into it kinda killed the flow.