i stopped half way while watching the video. intro is ugly, there aren't many effects being used in the video, failed attempt at copying oracul's video. replays are just too boring and doesn't really make me that thrilled :| song choice is just wrong bro, first song and the second song doesn't match well together. camera movements are okay. 3/10.

Err ..
I don't know how to say it, but that was the worst video I've seen in a while.

-Bad music
-Pointless replays if not bad
-Bad effects/font
-Bad sync
-Bad transitions
-Horrible camera work (if any)
-Pointless zooms on random stuff
etc.

2/10 for trying.

Made me cry with bloody tears.
Very good music choise, but was used by Oracle.
Considering as an attempt to fake his video with having horrible replays.
Low realism, low intention.
No sync at all imo.
Made a horrible impression from the start.
1/10 for the attempt to even make a video.

Everthing was pretty much said.
Anyways, the quality was really bad, it was laggy, colors werent chosen correctly.
Bad transitions. The start was just funny and weird.
You failed attempting to copy Oracul's video.

No ideas, plagiarism, bad replays, a terrible camera and a low fps.
2/10

I have lag because I have really bad procesor

You can make a movie whiteout shaders.
For example, look at macperfect's movie "Rage".

Do you think I am such a thing I can??
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Even if you say i must view turtorials on yt i can't cuz i have shit internet connection ( 10kb/s)

deleted a few posts.
if you cannot accept criticism, then posting in the art board may not be such a great idea.