Toribash
The replays are good, but the music choice was not. The effects are not anything special either, and you could atleast try and use pan and crop to hide the fraps website. Not much sync also.
If you correct the video properly, you can turn it into an awesome one.
oh yeah
err i think its an ok edit and the replays are good but it just looked like u were showing
off the replays not the video u made cuz it was really slow and imo. i think u could off
at least speed it up on the dubstep part or something.
if the music is slow it does not mean u cant speed it up and sync it.
~I make videos and stuff~
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Sudden camera movements.
Lots of empty background time.
Sometimes the action is all the way on the edge.
Sometimes there are reference points off the screen (body/ground interaction). It makes it seem like things float (like when a game has no shadows).
Cartoon sort of effect is kind of annoying, needs better angles and less of a blank screen when moving around, all in all ok 6/10
Replays were good.
Recordings looked laggy, try speeding them up when needed.
Effects needed ALOT of work.
Black border around recordings + Fraps logo

I guess that'll do for now. 5/10